Shroom-Mage's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Death bomb]

That's cool.

I really like what you did with the music. It's like a music video and a game in one.

You should put in some sort of better indication of what damages you and what doesn't, though. Maybe the missile should just flash red or something simple like that, since a sound effect may disturb the awesome music thing you've got going on there.

trekopep responds:

I would fix it, but I cant. I deleted the fla. file to save memory on my mac. Thanks for the review though! ;)

[Pac-Luigi]

Pac-Man, but Luigi. What more can be said?

It's not quite as fun as the real Pac-Man since there aren't any Mario-themed twists. Sometimes Luigi doesn't seem to want to turn down a pass, but it's not a huge problem.

My biggest complaint is the sound. That music was annoying as hell, and there weren't any sound effects. Add in the classic coin sound and maybe Luigi yelling, "Noooo!!!" when he dies. Then lower the volume on the music or change it completely.

Chimp-Comix responds:

eh, i got lazy

[Halo Quiz Game]

What was the point in this?

There are plenty of websites where you can make and submit quizzes, and this is not one of them.

The music was good but had nothing to do with Halo. The questions didn't have much to do with Halo knowledge, either. I thought it would be a Halo trivia quiz, but it's actually one of those annoying "What blah blah are you?" Noah's Ark? George Bush? That didn't make any sense. The font was also very generic.

To be honest, I don't care for flash quizzes, but I've seen a few that are decent. For this to be one of them, it would take quite a lot of work.

Al6200 responds:

Well, technically, if you go to the submission rules for Newgrounds, it says that quiz games are allowed, but I suppose some sites are more "geared" towards quizes than this site.

Well, according to some, Halo has significant allusions and parallels to biblical events, so that isn't really subjective.

Yeah, I guess the font was a kinda dull choice.

I appreciate your review and you taking the time to share your opinion.

[4 Incomplete Games]

Just finish the thing!

The games are pretty good, although the controls in the platformer are quite stiff. The mouse game is my favorite; get back to work on it and save every hour! A week without saving?! Come on!

It needs some atmospheric music. Nothing that going to be really noticable, just something simple that will help people get into each game, even if it's some plain boops and beeps. Of course, you can put an option to disable music. Ordinary sound effects wouldn't hurt either.

I gave it a 0 because a compilation of buggy, incomplete games shouldn't be here. Finish each game and upload them as you do. And again... SAVE OFTEN!

johnfn responds:

Yeah, the platformer is a nuisance. The only way I could get it to work properly was to set keyboard repeat at its maximum rate. Then I forgot to tell you all to do the same. >< I be a fool.

Yeah, you're also right about the music. I got a little lazy about it at the end... Definitely when I submit one of these things as the full version it'll have music.

And if your voting 0 and rating 6, I have a change to be underdog... :P *crosses fingers*