All it needs is sound.
That was great. The ending was pretty funny, too. If you had used sound effects, the whole flash would have rocked hard.
Like they all say, good potential.
It's obvious to everybody that you have some pretty decent artistic skills. You definitely could make some good flash if you wanted to.
Now, I understand that part of getting all the attention for your turds is to give them outrageous names like "HENTAI SEX PARTY!!!" but I really think that if you gave them appropriate names and icons, they'd get much higher scores.
Unlike your last two, I think this one will get too high a score to become a turd. I'm noticing a distinct increase in the quality of your flashes. The first was only a boring loop more suitable for a preloader, the second was a decent series of animations that didn't actually go anywhere, and this one would have been pretty good if it were longer.
Oh, and why does RoflMuffinGlock never wear his glock? (He looks better without it, personally, but just curious.)
i suck @ flash, read the reviews.
Made me laugh.
At first I was like, "Huh? Crap?"
Then I'm, "Hey, nice animation, but it doesn't do anything..."
And then I'm, "Roflcopter!"
Loved the ending!
thanks for the reveiw
I've seen a couple of tutorials here and there that tell you how to disable the right-click menu, but I've found this one to be the most useful. Being able to add anything to the menu allows for a lot of possibilities.
But I do have a bit of advice. I recommend adding a screenshot icon so that people searching will be more likely to check it out, and also it should be called something more relevant than "Tutorial - 1", like "Altering the Right-Click Menu".
Thanks for the Advice..
I have changed it now!
I will let every1 know im working on another tutorial... with better graphics and more topics covered.
This is awesome!
You definitely need to keep making more of these. I consider this to be up there with Link's Quest For Ass (although in all honesty, LQFA2 is a lot funnier). I like what you did with the sound effects. Kirby's voice acting fit right in with his SSBM voice. In the next one, though, try to limit the use of imported images like the Cartman and Monty Python heads. They were a bit odd, although the Monty Python thing was pretty hilarious.
Oh, and for the record, Kirby's Dreamland (GameBoy) was the first Kirby game. It was released in 1992. Kirby's Adventure (NES) was released a year later in '93. (Or '97 for you Aussies out there!)
Still plenty of room for improvement.
If you want to make it really good, I suggest buying a mic. Other than that, you should run all the text through a spell-checker. Good quality text makes the whole thing just look better. A couple of the animations could also use a bit of refinement. The music at the end started messing up while I was viewing the character profiles (which, with the exception of that head, should probably be at the beginning), and the music didn't stop when I pressed replay.
Now, overall I'd say this was a relatively good flash. Make it a little longer and I think this could become fairly popular. Oh, and put in more of that dog with the Low Rider song!
Well... that's a weird coincidence then.
I'm not saying you ripped off of Robot Chicken, but it's so similar, it's very easy to understand why anyone would think you did rip off. Here's what happens in the Robot Chicken short:
Walt Disney's head is frozen.
Years later, it is attached to a giant mechanical spider-like body.
He must feast on the flesh of Cuban children.
He tries to eat Elion Gonzales.
He gets shot by Castro.
Now, up until the part about the Cuban children, this flash is *identical* to the Robot Chicken short. If that's a coincidence, then it's one of the most bizzaire ones I've seen, because the concept is pretty weird to begin with. If you haven't seen the Robot Chicken episode, go see it, and you'll probably be shocked, unless of course you *both* got the idea from somewhere else. (By the way, where *did* you get this idea? Concieved it all by yourself?)
Anyway, the rules clearly state that you aren't to submit trailers.
Awesome for being so short.
That's probably the coolest short flash I've seen.
It starts really suddenly, though. A preloader should be there, although there wasn't really any loading.
I love the way you convey his expressions perfectly with only his eye brows and moustache.
The guy seems like a cross between Ignignok and Dr. Evil, and that robot also reminds me a lot of ATHF.
Didn't you *just* submit this trailer?
Ha, good job.
That was pretty funny there. You had some really great animations in some parts, but I was actually ready to blam it until the music started and it really got good.
I recommend slowing down that beginning part and adding some sound effects to it. I couldn't understand what was going on there until I watched it the second time.
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